Tuesday, May 22, 2012
Book Review - Prize of my Heart
Okay, so maybe when I said Sunday I meant Tuesday. Oh well. But! I did actually force myself to sit down and read the book (PRIZE OF MY HEART, by Lisa Norato). What follows is a brief sampling of my thoughts for the first four or so chapters, when I got tired of nitpicking and started to relax into the writing a bit more.
First thoughts: oh, this is a Christian book. Or at least, the author is. Not that it's a bad thing, not at all, it's just not my thing. Anyways.
This man, the main character, is an emotional rollercoaster bordering on the schizophrenic. He's tortured, he's annoyed, he's admiring and captivated, all within the first few pages. A completely unreasonable assumption is made that the mysterious maiden in the shipyard is working for the man who's been revealed to be the kidnapper of his only son (Drama! Intrigue! Soap opera!) and off we go.
She's a pious girl, no surprises there. I have a long way to go, so I'll spare you the details, but the next chapter ends with the words "like Elijah fleeing the wrath of Queen Jezebel". The kid has been renamed Drew because it has a D in it, just like David. Had enough religious references shoved down your throat yet? I have.
Pistachio Waistcoat. Just keep that one in mind. Okay, this actually made laugh out loud - they've been talking about this George character the whole bok up to this point. No last name, just George. And then we just got this line, from the male else's POV, "He did not know this George, though the name did ring familiar ". Really? Something strikes you familiar about George? And later, when he wonders if that George is the same one as the man his lady was talking about. Oh, that George? You know, I get them all so confused.
The first half of the next section was about the dining room, and the food, and it's all very delicious sounding . Then we are without warning thrust into the point of view of the five year old who speaks about himself in the third person.
I managed to read the whole thing, I really did. It's not that it's a bad book, really it isn't. It's formulaic, sure, but what book that I'm going to find at the top spot on Amazon isn't going to be? It's entertaining. Too preachy, and I'm not even going to pretend that I read the majority of the last chapter (the one right after the male lead and female lead realize that they want to be together forever) because it was all about the main male character reaffirming his relationship with God. And like I said, I'm not really into that.
So. Lame? Yeah, it was. Easy to read? You betcha. It was kinda like meditation. Just move your eyes and try not to think too much. Can I remember the names of the main characters, two days later? Not in the slightest. Brody? Lauren? Something like that. Sounds like a success to me. I read it, didn't I? If I had paid money for it I would be exceptionally disappointed. But, I didn't. So I'm only marginally disappointed. It just wasn't that good. It wasn't awful, but why would I give points for being only slightly better than crap?
All right, enough of this nonsense. The next book I'm reading seems to be... The Beauty Bride, by Claire Delacroix. We'll see how that one goes next week, I guess.
Also, next chapter of my own book in progress, coming atcha right after I post this. Calling it The Caiaphas for now, work in progress. Blah blah blah, see you some other time that isn't right now.