tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-344354231562172395.post1243369485149311025..comments2016-03-31T08:41:37.283-07:00Comments on Proof of Theft: First ThoughtsLee Shelly Allenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04974203578017620169noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-344354231562172395.post-21494159946075825712010-10-29T12:45:30.313-07:002010-10-29T12:45:30.313-07:00Without TV, the Internet and even (God forbid)Spor...Without TV, the Internet and even (God forbid)Sports Illustrated, your characters, immersed as they are in a common journey and spending every waking moment together are naturally going to confide in one another, tell each other their life stories to not only pass the time and ease the discomforts of their undertaking but to feel each other out to see if they can trust each other and depend on each other when the chips are down. People in perilous undertakings really do become a "band of brothers." You don't need 100,000 more words, you just need to show WHY they are doing what they are doing. If you make the dialogue plausible you strengthen your story. Right??Davehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08307444879465563181noreply@blogger.com